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Shibata Hiroaki
Shibata Hiroaki
Chuyên Gia
Chief Strategic Officer
CV Clinic: Your Career Summary Doesn't Need to Tell Your Whole Story — Just Enough to Earn You 10 More Seconds

Here's something worth knowing about the other side of the process:
Companies hiring for entry-level roles often get hundreds of CVs for a single posting.
Recruiters aren't reading each one word for word — they're skimming, deciding in seconds whether to keep reading or move to the next one.
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That changes what your CV actually needs to do.
Not tell your whole story.
Just earn you a few more seconds of attention.

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This shows up most clearly in the Career Summary section — the few lines at the top of your CV.
A lot of candidates use it to write a paragraph about who they are as a person: hardworking, passionate, a fast learner.
It reads nice. It also tells a recruiter almost nothing they can act on.

Here's the difference:
❌ Before:"I am a hardworking and enthusiastic recent graduate with a degree in Business Administration. I am a fast learner and always eager to take on new challenges. I believe I would be a great fit for a marketing role because of my passion for learning."

✅ After:"Marketing graduate who ran a 500-member university marketing club — planned 3 campus events, grew the club's social reach by 40%. Looking to bring that same execution speed to an entry-level marketing role."
Same person. Same lack of "real" work experience.

But the second version gives a recruiter something concrete to remember you by, in the few seconds they're actually looking.
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The fix isn't writing more.
It's cutting until only the parts that prove something are left.

What's in your Career Summary right now — a description of who you are, or proof of what you've done?

Drop a line from yours below, happy to help tighten it up.
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Shibata Hiroaki
Shibata Hiroaki
Chuyên Gia
Chief Strategic Officer
Great question, Thuy san — and honestly, that's the exact gap in my last post. Numbers are just the clearest kind of proof, not the only kind.

A few things that work just as well:

Scope, not just results
"Ran a 500-member club" tells a recruiter the size of what you handled — even with no % attached.

Something that outlived you
"Built the onboarding doc the club still uses today" shows lasting impact without needing a metric.

Being chosen
"Selected as 1 of 5 out of 200 applicants" — that's a number, but it's proof of trust, not proof of a result.

A before/after in words
"Took over a dead social account and made it the most active one in the club" — the comparison does the work, no % required.

The common thread: swap "hardworking" and "passionate" for anything specific enough that someone else could actually picture it. That's the real test — numbers or not.
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Thuy Doan
Thuy Doan
Bestie có tâm
Account Manager
Thanks for the useful tip. Besides figures and measurable results, what else can I include in my CV to demonstrate my achievements?
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